Feedback from Interim Crit:
- - Need to work on adding a positive element
- - Progress from blurry holga images to clearer close up(?) images... try medium format camera
- - Could show progression through time - story board - from distortion to clarity, old to new, negative to positive,... change in colour tone??
- - Try different / more quotes/ statistics... some positive. Put a twist on some quotes?
- - Try different pattern? Maybe not polka dot?
- - Definitely use book idea
- - Research - Joel Peter Witkin
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